谈谈封闭式的校园教育

作者：王燕飞  这篇议论文写得很好，结构严谨，首先说到现在很多学校都在搞封闭式的校园教育，严重限制了同学们的自由，学生对此有不同的看法。接着描述了持不观点的学生意见，最后小作者也发表了自己的观点。

   At present,many schools seal their students in the schools all day even the whole week.Students have different opinions about it.
    Many students think that they have no freedom so that they can't do their own things and approaching the society gets more and more impossible.If so,their interets can't be developed completely.Little by little,they aren't interested in studies at all.AS we can know,it is bad for themselves.
    Others believed that it's students' main duty to study and schools are the best places to study.It's a time when students should study so they think they should concentarte on their lessons. If they are out of school,they won't control their behaviors well.They may do something bad.For example,they might go to the Internet bars and stay there all day or all night.As a result,it will have a bed effect on them.
    So in my opinion,it's necessary for schools to keep students at school all day.But schools should give students more free time to dovelop their interests.And schools should also organize more society activities.On the one hand,students have opportunities to have access to society.On the other hand,schools organize students together so that they can't leave the groups to do other bad things.In conclusion,students should study lessons and life or society at the same time.

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